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slavethruhypno@yahoo.com
4/14/19, 4:08 PM
This should be great! All these men being transformed to serve other men! Would be great to be one of the staff!
Anonymous
4/14/19, 3:37 PM
Can't wait to see where this goes. it sure got *me* hard already
4/14/19, 2:45 PM
I do understand that th"transformation" of Michael was merely designed to set up the premise; as it stands,you're off to a good start. It'll be engaging to watch how you try to step up your game where true erotic narrative is concerned; I'll be rooting for you.
4/14/19, 2:39 PM
interesting idea! I'm excited to see how it progresses. I liked Michael's mindset and personality, his easy acceptance because of his circumstances. You don't see that often. While transformation isn't usually my thing, this story seems really hot! Hope you continue
Mdlftr
4/14/19, 2:24 PM
I LOVE these growth stories! I remember when I first came across FanTCman and his amazing muscle growth stories. I had never seen anything like them before. Then I found the Absman420 universe!! Better and better! Both of you are such good writers - subtle humor, vivid descriptions, compelling stream-of-consciousness asides from the narrator --- followed by mind blowing descriptions of muscle growth and heightened male sexuality! What a treat! Thanks for posting, Absman420! P.S. My personal favorite of your stories was "Milkman" -something about sustained, incremental muscle growth supplementing one's hard work in the gym was very appealing! Also the descriptions of outrageous muscle growth, especially pecs, just pushed all my buttons! I always look for those muscle growth stories like yours and FanTCman's that are joyful and pysched in their depictions of increased muscle growth and masculine identity! Of course it's happy and exciting! How could a man NOT be happy becoming even MORE of what makes him a man?! I quibble that the "dumbing down" and "getting stupid and sex crazed" is often coupled with the muscle growth, which, personally, I find to be overkill. Why not keep your brains and male cunning and strategic intelligence along with bigger muscles? Who says that men who are physically advanced specimens have to necessarily be stupid pieces of meat? Why can't they be fully cognizant appreciators of muscle and art, literature, careers? Good to see you posting!
StatueLover
4/14/19, 1:47 PM
I'm loving it!
4/14/19, 12:43 PM
This seems to be going to be a great series! Hopefully there'll be the arrogant, muscled jock type man who will turn into a twink ;) Can't wait to see more!
Anonymous
4/14/19, 11:23 AM
Nice story but wish we could see Tyler was willingly bring his friends into the team for Coach. Danny did a great job !!
Anonymous
4/14/19, 11:21 AM
Cool and hot : ) this one has the creepiness that every successful dark story has !!
4/14/19, 10:43 AM
I think it's a great premise, but IMO, it would be a lot hotter if you slowed down and described the characters' physical and mental transformations in greater detail, giving us their perspectives on the change.