Recent Comments

StatueLover
4/14/19, 1:47 PM
I'm loving it!
4/14/19, 12:43 PM
This seems to be going to be a great series! Hopefully there'll be the arrogant, muscled jock type man who will turn into a twink ;) Can't wait to see more!
Anonymous
4/14/19, 11:23 AM
Nice story but wish we could see Tyler was willingly bring his friends into the team for Coach. Danny did a great job !!
Anonymous
4/14/19, 11:21 AM
Cool and hot : ) this one has the creepiness that every successful dark story has !!
4/14/19, 10:43 AM
I think it's a great premise, but IMO, it would be a lot hotter if you slowed down and described the characters' physical and mental transformations in greater detail, giving us their perspectives on the change.
4/14/19, 10:40 AM
I actually preferred this chapter over the first one. The elements of realism in Quent's apathetic descent into mindless masturbation and slobbery made it even hotter, and I loved his interactions with his younger brother and with the barista. Different strokes for different folks, I guess ;-)
Hypno_TPE_Master
4/14/19, 10:05 AM
First chapter was great, did not enjoy this chapter at all. Too many elements were introduced that were not present or hinted at (at least not well) that made the story go in a very different direction than I anticipated, in some ways. Looking forward to trying your next series or stand alone story, but unfortunately, this one is done for me.
rubbermannyc
4/14/19, 9:57 AM
I wish I had silver nipples and an assimilated mind.
rubbermannyc
4/14/19, 9:40 AM
your stories are always the best.
ForgottenCradle
4/14/19, 9:28 AM
Jacob is my spirit animal