Recent Comments

LongtimeFan
4/14/19, 1:00 AM
INCREDIBLE. Weight gain/size change, laziness, and apathy are among my biggest turn-ons, so this story is hitting all of my buttons. I also love how well you write "straight guy" logic ("Anal sex with another man isn't gay!"). Absolutely phenomenal work!
TimNJ
4/13/19, 10:23 PM
I want the barista to have recognized the scent on Quent's clothes, so they can get fat, lazy and horny together.
4/13/19, 8:02 PM
> I love how you keep pulling back from the full-on fucking…. > Only because I don't think I could sustain full-on fucking for 12 chapters! Glad you're into the slow build, tho. So am I -- you can tell who the real readers are. The most important thing in this chapter is Big Budd's dream, where he imagines what it will be like to go back to the bar in his hometown -- MUCH different from what actually happens to him in Chapter 11. No surprise, I originally "saw" this story as significantly shorter (probably five or six chapters), so this dream would've still been in the reader's head when we got to the actual moment. Of course, I got a little.... carried away in the middle chapters (enthusiastically channeling FanTCdude's spirit, mind you)... so a lot more happens than I'd originally anticipated. All good. That's really the interesting thing about looking back at something I wrote 15 years ago...
4/13/19, 7:23 PM
I love how you keep pulling back from the full-on fucking.....I'm into the slow build
4/13/19, 6:29 PM
REALLY want to see the payoff....
Anonymous
4/13/19, 5:16 PM
got me a drooling mess irl
Cumluvnbottom@yahoo.com
4/13/19, 4:53 PM
I like where this is going and look forward to reading more.
Max
4/13/19, 4:52 PM
really love the concept of the story, i wish there were poppers like this irl, mine isn't far as strong
David S
4/13/19, 3:26 PM
I'm loving this story, man! I can't wait for more. Thank you for contributing!!
Anonymous
4/13/19, 3:18 PM
can there be a part 2 of Nick changing?