Recent Comments

Anonymous
4/12/19, 10:45 PM
I created an account just to say I love this story, it's perfect. Please write more (and not necessarily just for this).
Apr 12, 2019
4/12/19, 10:39 PM
yeah, I found it incredibly awkward to write in that perspective though, and came real close to just scrapping it all and changing it all at the last minute before posting. decided to stick with it, even though it was way out of my comfort zone to write and keep the scenes working.
Apr 12, 2019
Anonymous
4/12/19, 10:38 PM
I hate the second person narration. It's so amateurish. Like trying to force thoughts into my head. Better leave that to me.
4/12/19, 10:16 PM
One of the best authors in this genre. Thanks for another hot tale!
Apr 12, 2019
4/12/19, 10:10 PM
I find Second Person narratives fascinating; well done!
Anonymous
4/12/19, 9:42 PM
cannot wait for the next chapter!!!!
Anonymous
4/12/19, 8:05 PM
Fuuuuuuuuuuck this story is hot. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Oct 5, 2006
Kevin
4/12/19, 6:32 PM
i like the story
Apr 11, 2019
Anonymous
4/12/19, 5:53 PM
a great debut, thank you
Anonymous
4/12/19, 4:39 PM
I loved this. It's a really hot idea.