Recent Comments

Apr 12, 2019
4/13/19, 8:34 AM
I don't usually like second person narration. This is one of the exceptions. Well done.
Anonymous
4/13/19, 7:55 AM
Reupload huh? Still would like to see this continue though.
Anonymous
4/13/19, 5:44 AM
finish the storie
Apr 12, 2019
Anonymous
4/13/19, 4:21 AM
Loved it. The narrative style did not impede the flow of the story. Well done!
degoetz@yahoo.com
4/13/19, 3:14 AM
Love this
Anonymous
4/13/19, 2:02 AM
Please make more
Apr 12, 2019
Anonymous
4/12/19, 11:03 PM
Amazingly hot. I love how the man became so addicted to the changes that he didn't notice or care that was slowly becoming gay.
Apr 11, 2019
KinkyNick
4/12/19, 10:47 PM
I enjoyed it but perhaps try writing it completely from the cop's perspective? How does it feel to be changed? When does he actually start to like it? Also, what happens when he get's to the Dom's house?
Anonymous
4/12/19, 10:45 PM
I created an account just to say I love this story, it's perfect. Please write more (and not necessarily just for this).
Apr 12, 2019
4/12/19, 10:39 PM
yeah, I found it incredibly awkward to write in that perspective though, and came real close to just scrapping it all and changing it all at the last minute before posting. decided to stick with it, even though it was way out of my comfort zone to write and keep the scenes working.