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Apr 11, 2019
Anonymous
4/12/19, 12:34 AM
was alright to he honest. only down side for me comes down to preference. i don't exactly like 12 ft tall giants bahaha.
Anonymous
4/11/19, 11:12 PM
Ive been following this story for a while. I hope we get to see other heroes get enslaved all the way. Maybe Cody helps brainwashing more heroes or there's a celebratory orgy with the rest of the heroes Imperious enslaved. Actually, is that what Psyphon is up to? Is he draining the powers of the other hypnotized heroes?
Anonymous
4/11/19, 9:47 PM
Fucking incredible story. keep it up!
4/11/19, 9:22 PM
I love the physical shifts and how you took your time with the CJ section; would love equal time with she-Clay and Clay-"ton"; oh,well...perhaps in the sequel or spin-off......[hint, hint]
Apr 11, 2019
4/11/19, 9:17 PM
I like it -- but then, I like anything that turns men into hyper-masculine himbos. What a great superpower!
4/11/19, 9:15 PM
Good job! Keep it up!
Apr 11, 2019
Anonymous
4/11/19, 9:15 PM
3,5/10 points.
Anonymous
4/11/19, 8:47 PM
This series is sooo hot. Especially the feminization aspect of Brody... I love, how Darius and Brody become this "perfect match".
4/11/19, 8:46 PM
I really like the bait-and-switch angle to the story. This has alot of potential.
Apr 11, 2019
4/11/19, 8:27 PM
Agreed, it's a fine start, anf worth pursuing. A couple of suggestions: try to invoke as many senses as you can in descriptions, and, if you're going to use a first person narrative, take your time before revealing that the protagonist is actually the antagonist. Aside from the above, it's fun stuff.