Recent Comments

Anonymous
4/11/19, 11:12 PM
Ive been following this story for a while. I hope we get to see other heroes get enslaved all the way. Maybe Cody helps brainwashing more heroes or there's a celebratory orgy with the rest of the heroes Imperious enslaved. Actually, is that what Psyphon is up to? Is he draining the powers of the other hypnotized heroes?
Anonymous
4/11/19, 9:47 PM
Fucking incredible story. keep it up!
4/11/19, 9:22 PM
I love the physical shifts and how you took your time with the CJ section; would love equal time with she-Clay and Clay-"ton"; oh,well...perhaps in the sequel or spin-off......[hint, hint]
Apr 11, 2019
4/11/19, 9:17 PM
I like it -- but then, I like anything that turns men into hyper-masculine himbos. What a great superpower!
4/11/19, 9:15 PM
Good job! Keep it up!
Apr 11, 2019
Anonymous
4/11/19, 9:15 PM
3,5/10 points.
Anonymous
4/11/19, 8:47 PM
This series is sooo hot. Especially the feminization aspect of Brody... I love, how Darius and Brody become this "perfect match".
4/11/19, 8:46 PM
I really like the bait-and-switch angle to the story. This has alot of potential.
Apr 11, 2019
4/11/19, 8:27 PM
Agreed, it's a fine start, anf worth pursuing. A couple of suggestions: try to invoke as many senses as you can in descriptions, and, if you're going to use a first person narrative, take your time before revealing that the protagonist is actually the antagonist. Aside from the above, it's fun stuff.
4/11/19, 8:17 PM
I beieve that "adorable" might be an appropriate adjective, here. The story was sweet, and I wholeheartedly agree that adding the lifestyle to the wish effect was a nice touch; it could be loads of fun to see Nathan actually engaging in his new life, with Amir hanging around just for the heck of it, like an episodic series(what OTHER kinds of trouble can they get into?) Nice work!