Personally I generally prefer longer stories with more elaborately developed characters, relationships, and plot. But for a short story I thought you did very well -- cute plot and hot description of Nathan's transformation. I was happy that you provided Nathan with a compatible new life to go with his body ;-) Thanks for sharing your imagination and writing talent!

MORE PLEASE! Thankyou for writting this.

I just love the dynamic Mason and Jacob have going on,a top and a bottom. How about after the twinks we try one of the teachers for all the daddy fans out there?

Very hot. Nicely done!

I love the whole scene changing you did but maybe next time spend a little more on the sex? Make it more detailed. Anyway it was really good!

The switching the masculine to feminin from an app is super hot to me. Please write more or spin that off.

SUPERHEROES! SPANDEX! MIND CONTROL! …MORE PLEASE!

This is great fun, and really hot. I'm excited for what's next!

....So...freaking......gorgeous; the ultimate variation on the changeling trope, masterfully developed and lyrically structured. A true thing of beauty . Erotica elevated.

It would be great to humiliate the business executive further by turning him into a cock hungry whore!! Make him become shamelessly addicted to being a gay pussy slut!! Have Ron modify his entire professional wardrobe by a making a nice clean slit on the inseam of the back of all his dress pants which can be easily zipped up or concealed so that he can be taken from behind while still completely dressed in his countless fine suits! it will be especially hot to have anonymous strange men walking into his plush office and bending him over his own desk and fucking him hard through his nice suits right there in his own office!! After having countless men used him and dump a few loads up his hole… he is soon convinced that by taking load after load of cum up his hole throughout the day is the only way to remain alert and focused on his duties. Ron being mind fucked over so hard now would willingly put in the effort, time and even spend his own money into arranging men to come fuck him in his office because he believes that being treated like a cheap whore is good for his career. Every time his man hole is filled with endless streams of CUM, deep down he knows that this is for his own good. As Ron begs men after men to fuck him he knew that this is what it takes to retain his prestige corporate job title/position as a high flying executive and not damage his reputation in being a respected businessman. Ron would also find it absolutely reasonable that it is imperative for him to remain impeccably dressed and presentable so that he can make as much money as he can to pay those men who would only fuck him if he writes them a nice fat check. Since CUM is so precious now to Ron, after each time he is sexually used and violated he would without a second thought swiftly insert a medium sized vibrating butt plug back into his deflowered hole before closing that slit just so all those loads of cum stay inside of him all day while he is at work!!