Recent Comments

4/10/19, 6:44 AM
I also had to take a moment to track the Psyphone exchange. Otherwise, the story is coming together fantastically.
ForgottenCradle
4/10/19, 5:22 AM
have to admit, the writing did confuse me at times,but it was too hot and I was too hard to be bothered by it
Anonymous
4/10/19, 3:37 AM
so glad to see you writing and posting again!!!
SirD
4/10/19, 3:16 AM
loved the story and cant wait for the next part
4/10/19, 2:53 AM
thanks this feels fun as always. glad back. I would recommend more beta-readers. but do like the visuals and the "sense" the story makes and uses
4/10/19, 12:49 AM
Excellent. Looking forward to this story!!
JR
4/10/19, 12:42 AM
I love the fact that he went from muscles to fat. Curious to see what will happen to him as a chub
Mindwinder
4/10/19, 12:29 AM
This was great! I love the history of total control Nathan has over his brother, and the descriptions of the guys getting hypnotized initially and then even further later were written really well. Do you plan on continuing this, or is it just a one-and-done?
4/10/19, 12:22 AM
Love the story. Can't wait for whatever comes next. Quick note if you plan to continue this along these lines. Wolverine has a son named Daken who has pheromone powers and is canonically bi/ pansexual. Would be hot to see some dad/son action since you're already dealing with brothers.
Derek Williams
4/9/19, 10:22 PM
Will it continue? Yup, but I'm sure taking my time on it.