Recent Comments

4/9/19, 3:11 PM
As from the last chapter, what kinks you would like to see? And what would you like to happen to William? Become a muscle beast or stay skinny and become a servant to Oliver and Alex? Can comment here or message me on Twitter at tyl7897.
Evan
4/9/19, 2:56 PM
Fantastic. Such great content. Nice build up and hot scenes. Loved messing with their heads. Great writing, thank you.
4/9/19, 2:52 PM
Well plotted, but could use a slower build, narratively-speaking.
degoetz@yahoo.com
4/9/19, 2:38 PM
What a fantastic story!
Anonymous
4/9/19, 12:10 PM
Yes! This is amazing. I love it. More please :) Best thing I've read on here in a long time.
LongtimeFan
4/9/19, 11:39 AM
Amazingly hot story! Love the transformations and detail. But as the above poster said, it's also terrifying...the idea of the American military sucking the brains out of every guy in the country and reducing them to mindless, patriotic muscleheads...brr. Any villain who says "order is necessary" is a guaranteed creep, and this is no exception. Great work!
Evan
4/9/19, 7:13 AM
Great! Liked the drugging and control over the boys. I like the play on "Warehouse" for supply too, nicely done.
Anonymous
4/9/19, 6:18 AM
would love a interlude chapter detailing Pete and Greg's continued adventures. And, where is Prim, and what is he up to?
Anonymous
4/9/19, 6:11 AM
As usual!!!
Anonymous
4/9/19, 4:42 AM
I wasn't sure at first, but the more I read it, the more I enjoyed it. Good story!!!