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4/8/19, 4:52 AM
Thanks. Actually Jim shouldn't really exist at all. All the other boys have had their old selves completely erased. They are only preppies now. That had always been my intention. Jim "sticking around" to watch his new preppy life came about from a comment. I have to admit, it is fun to keep one of the boys squirming at his fate. But he is in fact powerless, doomed to watch. It's akin to petrification in that regard, at least for me. Either the guy is completely gone and only a statue or aware and unable to move because he is a mere object. So I chose to make one of the boys aware but helpless. If you meant having more to "say" as the stuff happens to him, I suppose he could have, but there's only so many ways to write/depict revulsion before it gets stale or too repetitive (or not saved for another young man's transformation to preppy). I also liked him collapsing and trying to avoid paying attention knowing that when he next does it can only be worse. That's my two cents (for the loafer slots!) anyway. Jim would never be merged into James. He would just be gone. Perhaps Jim will fully die off later on in the story (not saying yes or no) but right now it's fun to have him tortured. @tiny tim - the whole point of this series is preppification, or turning guys into preppies. Clothing fetish, perhaps, but only insomuch as clothing is vastly important and integral to preppiness. It's not like one can avoid it as per the nature of the subject material. It's just part of it, along with their personalities being altered to "good & obedient & pleasant". So no, there won't be any guys who are preppy turning into any sort of other clique or group. Having them turn away from it would go against the premise of the series, and turning them back once they become preppy is impossible within the world of the story. Once prepped, they shall remain so. Again, thanks for reading and liking!
Fan
4/8/19, 3:46 AM
Thank you! The idea and the writing are just exceptional. I agree with the above comments that the subtle changes in Ben are wonderful. It would be great to see more from that perspective. Thanks again! I hope you keep writing.
Anonymous
4/8/19, 3:24 AM
This was well written but damn is it unsettling. This feels like psychological horror more than erotica. Well done man.
Anonymous
4/8/19, 1:32 AM
anything in boots is hot
Anonymous
4/8/19, 1:02 AM
Really appreciate your efforts to improve the writing and upgrade the verse like introducing MKII model and so on.
tiny tim
4/7/19, 11:31 PM
More 'funny' than really 'sexy', but still enjoyable..This author really seems to have a clothing fetish...Perhaps at some point he'll decide to write the exact opposite theme, where a smart & 'prissy' good-boy is slowly transformed into a dumb and brutish Skinhead or Leather freak ???...[or perhaps one of his 'good boys', who is more underdeveloped in the penis dept. will discovers his inner-panty-loving girlish self ??]
Apr 4, 2019
White Dom
4/7/19, 10:20 PM
awesome story love sub dad tales also hot to see white dom sub blk. so much is written the other way around. nice to see it changed. sure hope this is the start of a continuing series.
4/7/19, 10:11 PM
Hey all. I'm sorry that I haven't gotten around to adding the last few installments before the end of the labyrinth, so I did open it up as a community series if anyone wants to help me finish it up. I'm overwhelmed with classes and working 50+ hours a week that I haven't taken the time to work on any stories as I'd like. It would also be cool to see where other people take the story. I didn't realize it's been over three months since I last worked on this project now.
Anonymous
4/7/19, 7:56 PM
loveit! I hope theres more
Hunter_C_Wolf@Hotmail.Com
4/7/19, 7:26 PM
A head sucking helmet gave me a productive boner bro