Recent Comments

Anonymous
4/7/19, 5:00 PM
This story is incredibly hot. Love the transformation descriptions. Keep up the great story
pupdon@gmail.com
4/7/19, 4:34 PM
I am loving this. I can't wait to see more of his transformation.
ForgottenCradle
4/7/19, 4:33 PM
THE WAIT WAS SO WOOOORTH IT! 😍
Anonymous
4/7/19, 4:08 PM
This is so hot. please continue!
Anonymous
4/7/19, 3:57 PM
Awesome!! I saw huge improvements as you listened to some of the comments. I love it, bro.
lloyd311@aol.com
4/7/19, 3:04 PM
Concur with all of the above. Great story. Loved the subtlety and the humor. Description of Lucas is well written and super hot. Looking forward to reading more of your stuff. Thanks... LLOYD
4/7/19, 2:43 PM
The story's becoming layered; I'm wondering which of the two subjects seen so far will become part of the negotiation (I'm hoping to see more of Catboy)...
Mdlftr
4/7/19, 2:22 PM
The humor in this story is so well worked out - between the narrator's manipulative asides to the audience and Lucas' earnest declarations of alignment with the socially oppressed, that the whole scenario would make a great Netflix movie!
Anonymous
4/7/19, 2:21 PM
This is great! I love the new chapter. I was hoping that Jim would slowly merge into James, but seeing him struggle is great.
Mdlftr
4/7/19, 1:58 PM
This is GREAT! A sexy story that manages to combine enticing muscle glimpses along with tongue-in-cheek sociological-psychobabble! I can't wait to see what social constructs they'll explore and devolve next -- maybe the tyranny of body-centric reactions to the subtle secondary male sexual characteristics as expressed in hyper-masculinized males with exaggerated musculature, specifically massive pectoral overdevelopment?! What is the tragedy of a hyper-masculine male who is fated to be perceived as a mere repository of other's sexual fantasies? Is there any hope for his acceptance as a normalized individual whose presentation to, and relationship with others is NOT focused solely on his muscular, masculine muscle tits and hairy pits? Quel horror! Definitely worthy of consideration for a more thorough exploration - maybe in a multi-chapter thesis?