Recent Comments

4/7/19, 2:43 PM
The story's becoming layered; I'm wondering which of the two subjects seen so far will become part of the negotiation (I'm hoping to see more of Catboy)...
Mdlftr
4/7/19, 2:22 PM
The humor in this story is so well worked out - between the narrator's manipulative asides to the audience and Lucas' earnest declarations of alignment with the socially oppressed, that the whole scenario would make a great Netflix movie!
Anonymous
4/7/19, 2:21 PM
This is great! I love the new chapter. I was hoping that Jim would slowly merge into James, but seeing him struggle is great.
Mdlftr
4/7/19, 1:58 PM
This is GREAT! A sexy story that manages to combine enticing muscle glimpses along with tongue-in-cheek sociological-psychobabble! I can't wait to see what social constructs they'll explore and devolve next -- maybe the tyranny of body-centric reactions to the subtle secondary male sexual characteristics as expressed in hyper-masculinized males with exaggerated musculature, specifically massive pectoral overdevelopment?! What is the tragedy of a hyper-masculine male who is fated to be perceived as a mere repository of other's sexual fantasies? Is there any hope for his acceptance as a normalized individual whose presentation to, and relationship with others is NOT focused solely on his muscular, masculine muscle tits and hairy pits? Quel horror! Definitely worthy of consideration for a more thorough exploration - maybe in a multi-chapter thesis?
4/7/19, 1:50 PM
Seductive AMD or pleadire touch. Something into. become your signature?
Anonymous
4/7/19, 1:48 PM
Bravo! Please let the modifications (also mind alterations) resume! :)
ForgottenCradle
4/7/19, 1:04 PM
personally,I'd say fuck the coach next
Anonymous
4/7/19, 8:58 AM
would've been interesting to see Jim fight back a bit more, but still a great addition to the series :)
4/7/19, 5:42 AM
I love the idea of someone slowly being seduced by a man's scent and touch to give up control, and the idea of his own lust being used against him. This is a terrific exploration of that very hot idea.
Liam
4/7/19, 5:04 AM
That was an interesting and hot story, I didn't expect the dad to be the first to fall. I loved how the punishment is being carried, the bully still concious but unable to stop himself. I'm hoping to see more of your work in the future.