Recent Comments

wow lmao ok
4/5/19, 5:02 PM
I **love** the first transformation, but I would've loved it if the second transformation played the same. The new Mitch was miles hotter than Dumdum. If they got together at the end, this'd probably be my fav story in here. But alas, tis not such. Nevertheless, this is a great story. Well written, great plot, and (at least for the first half) very hot. Well done 😁
PKME
4/5/19, 5:01 PM
Great story. Hoping for more Asian Dom stories.
Anonymous
4/5/19, 4:56 PM
loved the details about the showers, the details of changes to the coaches changes and especially their lack of control
Apr 4, 2019
Anonymous
4/5/19, 4:51 PM
ive always liked dads control stories. why dont you make an story of dads slave harem
4/5/19, 4:39 PM
I like that the pov character was so vulnerable, and how he was caught between enjoying the hug and feeling fear. You handled the non-con elements well. :)
Cumluvnbottom@yahoo.com
4/5/19, 4:38 PM
A great story… hope to see more
Apr 4, 2019
Anonymous
4/5/19, 4:35 PM
Id really like to see a part 2 more control over the dad! and son of course!
Anonymous
4/5/19, 4:13 PM
You could incorporate chastity, cock shrinkage while the victim's body becomes muscular, cum denial, cock growth and so much more. Make it a slow burn. Let the victim realise what's going on and be helpless to stop it.
Sniff Freak
4/5/19, 12:04 PM
for some reason i picture ZIEGLERMONSTER as the top in this
Mar 31, 2019
rubaluva
4/5/19, 11:53 AM
The story was building really well, but it all came to a head pretty quickly, which was a pity.