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Mdlftr
4/4/19, 12:07 AM
Loving all the details - the "CyclOne" name with double entendres, the father/son storyline, the reappearance of Neil -- it's hard to imagine where this will all conclude - Exciting story that really moves along! That's hard to do in a muscle growth series! Excellent work!
Mdlftr
4/3/19, 11:58 PM
This story is really ramping up! First Cal, then Max, next Brody, then NEIL, then -- everyone in the gym, apparently! And none of them realize what's happening to them....Thrilling writing!
Mdlftr
4/3/19, 11:47 PM
I agree with everyone here- the descriptions and the "in the moment" approach from the "live video" is a very effective way of hyping the excitement and the tension. The muscle growth descriptions are so VIVID that you can practically see them! Excellent job!
Mdlftr
4/3/19, 11:39 PM
I love the video blogger patter - sounds like you've watched a lot of them! It will be interesting to see where this goes---
Jan 5, 2019
Anonymous
4/3/19, 11:23 PM
Well done I especially liked the point of the view of the entitled a--hole as he changed. I also like that the partner, Phibes, recognized him and fired him.
UchihaDEMS
4/3/19, 10:35 PM
You know, when the demon said you will get certain kinks I thought that at the end he would make William fuck him while he fucks his dad. Not nedding to change that much physically. A funny and twisted thing since it was stated that both dont like each other in that way and William was everything he does not like. Anyway, it was hot, seeing a dilf getting fuck is always welcome. Hairy dudes as bottom? Even better. Maybe some feet in the future? :3
4/3/19, 10:26 PM
You're right...it was a nice break....a quiet before the inevitable storm... Can't wait for the birthing!!
Mdlftr
4/3/19, 9:55 PM
Great finish! I love the way you wrapped everything up! It's interesting to speculate what the 40-ish Robert will change into after he finishes his water! Will Mick like it? Time will tell!
Anonymous
4/3/19, 9:41 PM
Excellent continuation of the transformation! The set up of the coach changing, followed by the entire team, seems like it cries out for a series of stories to develop the plot, but this solo episode is good by itself.
Anonymous
4/3/19, 9:36 PM
another excellent chapter!!!! hopefully we'll see bigger butts <3