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Mdlftr
4/3/19, 11:58 PM
This story is really ramping up! First Cal, then Max, next Brody, then NEIL, then -- everyone in the gym, apparently! And none of them realize what's happening to them....Thrilling writing!
Mdlftr
4/3/19, 11:47 PM
I agree with everyone here- the descriptions and the "in the moment" approach from the "live video" is a very effective way of hyping the excitement and the tension. The muscle growth descriptions are so VIVID that you can practically see them! Excellent job!
Mdlftr
4/3/19, 11:39 PM
I love the video blogger patter - sounds like you've watched a lot of them! It will be interesting to see where this goes---
Jan 5, 2019
Anonymous
4/3/19, 11:23 PM
Well done I especially liked the point of the view of the entitled a--hole as he changed. I also like that the partner, Phibes, recognized him and fired him.
UchihaDEMS
4/3/19, 10:35 PM
You know, when the demon said you will get certain kinks I thought that at the end he would make William fuck him while he fucks his dad. Not nedding to change that much physically. A funny and twisted thing since it was stated that both dont like each other in that way and William was everything he does not like. Anyway, it was hot, seeing a dilf getting fuck is always welcome. Hairy dudes as bottom? Even better. Maybe some feet in the future? :3
4/3/19, 10:26 PM
You're right...it was a nice break....a quiet before the inevitable storm... Can't wait for the birthing!!
Mdlftr
4/3/19, 9:55 PM
Great finish! I love the way you wrapped everything up! It's interesting to speculate what the 40-ish Robert will change into after he finishes his water! Will Mick like it? Time will tell!
Anonymous
4/3/19, 9:41 PM
Excellent continuation of the transformation! The set up of the coach changing, followed by the entire team, seems like it cries out for a series of stories to develop the plot, but this solo episode is good by itself.
Anonymous
4/3/19, 9:36 PM
another excellent chapter!!!! hopefully we'll see bigger butts <3
4/3/19, 9:00 PM
**Cadek:** I'm definitely going to have him change the people in his life including his professors, coaches, friends, and his family. Also, he’s going to find out that Oliver is the Green Arrow which makes him even more obsessed and find out who the other superheroes are and changing them too. Are there any kinks you would like to see since the demon did say that he might develop new kinks? Alex can say anything he wants as long as they hear his voice but eventually or soon his powers will grow when he gets a certain warlock under his control.