Recent Comments

Anonymous
4/2/19, 4:19 PM
Top chapter and great to hear the insight to the writers mind there with the "CyclOne" response.
Anonymous
4/2/19, 2:32 PM
"First vacation in years" is a US thing. Full-time employed Brits have at least 5,5 weeks. Aside from that little detail, I like the tone. You describe social anxiety well.
Anonymous
4/2/19, 9:16 AM
Love This
Anonymous
4/2/19, 8:40 AM
love it :D Hope you are enjoying writing these!
Anonymous
4/2/19, 8:35 AM
i love it! cant wait to see more :)
Kevin
4/2/19, 7:26 AM
good story
4/2/19, 4:55 AM
Good to see the story progressing. Love it as always and can't wait to see how Rogan became who he is. Thanks, I always check for new work from you!
4/2/19, 4:51 AM
I think it's interesting,being transformed into Patrick Fillion characters... ; ) very cute!
Kevin
4/2/19, 4:50 AM
i liked it good story
Anonymous
4/2/19, 12:32 AM
I like it so far! Maybe include a description of Jim's appearance so we can fully appreciate his transformation.