Recent Comments

Anonymous
4/1/19, 2:37 AM
Love it. I hope there are more episodes
4/1/19, 2:28 AM
thanks for all the nice ideas for improving my stories, I will absolutely try to get better!
Anonymous
4/1/19, 2:20 AM
interesting
Anonymous
4/1/19, 1:52 AM
This is very hot! One formatting note: I think it would be helpful if you split your big paragraphs up a bit to make it easier for the reader (also, a lot of readers skip over stories with big blocks of text). For example, in your last big paragraph, you could split the three wishes into their own separate paragraphs and then have an additional paragraph for the (super hot but super futile!) attempts at shaving off the beard.
Mar 31, 2019
Hypno_TPE_Master
4/1/19, 12:44 AM
Very hot. Would like to see more chapters of this story or just more stories from you in general.
Mar 31, 2019
Kevin
3/31/19, 10:41 PM
good story
3/31/19, 10:26 PM
I am open to any critic, but just shooting out insults is not very helpful, I think.
Mar 20, 2019
IvorySilk
3/31/19, 10:21 PM
@david Oh, thank you so much! I too like drawing out the foreplay, so I'm glad we share that interest! ^^
IvorySilk
3/31/19, 10:16 PM
Ok, noted! I will keep that in mind for future stories! Thanks!
Anonymous
3/31/19, 10:06 PM
HOT, HOT, HOT!!!! Pushes all my buttons!! More hairy transformation please!!! GOOD JOB!