This was amazing, I can't believe it's the first thing you wrote! Can't wait to see what you have in store!

I was waiting for the "mental" effects to kick in and was not disappointed in the least.

@Hypnothrill & @longtimefan - Sorry to disappoint. I don't see it as him bullying his son. He's just doing what he thinks is best for him (as per the age old argument/misunderstanding between parent and child) and as far as he knows, it's what his son wants. After all, Dad found him in the polo and with the Sperrys on his phone. It's not unmotivated. He obviously didn't like the way his son was, so he jumped on his chance to make the boy 'presentable'. As for whether or not Dad knew about the 'quality' of the diner, I don't think it explicitly says that he didn't and can be left to interpretation. ;) Usually my thoughts on preppifying young men it was always hot for it to be forced upon them and didn't involve some sort of drug or whatever. So it had to be a parent or peers doing it to them. In this chapter, then, it's a little of both. As I had said in a previous comment, I wanted the transformations to vary. So I liked the idea that Jim pretty much brought this on himself. Sort of a self-inflicted peer pressure to not lose his only friends, and then... got out of hand (foot?). Also different is that I kept his skater self alive in there. He didn't exactly change willingly, since this is Gay Spiral stories and some sort of mind control is involved. So naturally he had to partake of the diner food to move him over to preppy for sure. But again, as requested/suggested in a different comment, he's stuck inside to watch as he lives his preppy life. There will be at least one one more chapter featuring a focus on these former skate bros, as Jim needs to learn about the 'arrangement' at the diner. And don't worry, there are other uncouth young men out there who need preppified. And our "Three Sperryteers' won't drop out entirely. As for the first boy that Jasper needed to directly inject with the serum, if I can come up with the perfect scenario for it, I'll write it as a side story. Thanks for reading, y'all!

I love this series!...but I have to agree with Hypnothrill on this one. It's explicitly stated that Jim's dad has NOT been to the diner, so all of his actions were of his own free will. Take away the hypnosis/mind control, and you're left with something that feels emotionally and mentally abusive (especially because you do an awesome job at writing Jim as a lost, frightened kid). As Hypnodominion said, it might be a set-up, but in general, seeing Jim forced into his transformation by someone who WASN'T magically/hypnotically influenced feels cruel. I'll keep reading, though--love seeing what comes next!

awesome as always! pleas write more

Really hot the story! I loved all the story so far of Lt. Mustang had so far! He is the perfect alpha soldier! Made completely for combat and cum! Man, the idea is very hot!! I wonder what will happen to him from now on! Please, continue this series!

Loved this chapter kind of cute and sweet to see him so vulnerable. Poor kid! I hope Jim isn't completely gone I mean he's preppy without the complete mood control so love to see how this goes. Maybe he'll run into his friends and try to reconnect. Will he be happy to be reunited or will this drive him to fight? Interesting take. Also curious about the first time they had to transform someone so fast. As Grizz was the second could be a chapter or a spin off story. Also love to see you write other prep stories on top of this series. If you'd like to exchange ideas or chat feel free to email me at suited.baby.venom@gmail.com

Very hot and AMAZING story, man! I loved how you wrote about capturing big alpha male soldier to be bound and milked endless! This is very hot!! I going definitely read the other ones!!

like cycle+clone!! we'll see the fate of these awesome characters very soon. amazing as always!!

I love this! Please make more