Recent Comments

Anonymous
3/30/19, 10:16 PM
I was really hoping Jim would willingly become James, but this was good. I hope there will be a group reunion, or maybe James will find a way to properly thank his dad.
3/30/19, 10:04 PM
I agree....perhaps Ben's story using a different form of narrative... This is some, as Max might say...hot ass shit!!
3/30/19, 9:47 PM
To address Hypnothrill's comments (BTW, Hypnothrill,I'm a huge fan of your work)....I have thefeelingthat this chapter is a true set-up, with the payoff being that Dad was actually in on it, a la the husbands in Siepford Wives .... well played, sir!
trytoknowyou@gmail.com
3/30/19, 9:16 PM
I loved this! Not every chapter need some kind of sex. And I loved the new transformation.
MakeMeAPigToo
3/30/19, 8:51 PM
Loved this!!!
Ben Conners
3/30/19, 7:31 PM
I love it. The clone aspect is very interesting and I hope we get to see some of Ben's birthday.
LongtimeFan
3/30/19, 7:23 PM
I don't know how you do it, Hypnothrill--every chapter is somehow hotter than the last! The muscle descriptions, the pictures you paint of a gym packed with mindless studs in jockstraps, the shifting dialogue...all brilliant. And silly me--I never realized the "clone" double entendre until you pointed it out! (I saw it as "Cycle," as in steroids). I DO, however, love the use of Eminem's "Lose Yourself"--very clever. Cheers!
Anonymous
3/30/19, 7:12 PM
I like reading about stats (weight, cock lenght). That turns me on (or helps me in imagining them huge)
Anonymous
3/30/19, 7:03 PM
looking forward to the next part!
3/30/19, 6:31 PM
I really liked the previous chapters, but I'm not quite feeling this one (despite enjoying some details like the oatmeal eating). For me, the story would work so much better if we found out that Jim's dad went to the diner the day before and came out with a sudden desire to preppify his son. Right now, his actions seem completely unmotivated, and most of the story just reads like a depressingly realistic tale of a conservative father bullying his teenage son.