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3/30/19, 11:53 AM
Thank you! Considering no real fucking has happened yet, it does read hot. Sometimes -- as you well know -- the tease of sex is almost as good as the sex itself, sometimes better. Personally, I think the last two chapters of this story are worth the rest of it. Like you -- rereading it after all these years -- I think it has a surprisingly strong opening, but if I were to edit it down, there are chunks of it in the middle chapters that could go -- they're fun, but not necessary to the advancement of the plot. I was enjoying the characters when I was writing it, the feedback was inspiring and so, I extended the plot (it's like a Netflix show that gets a second season so has to stretch the material -- fortunately, in my case, "stretching the material" was part of the fetish) But chapters 11 & 12, when they Budd Brothers finally get back home Kansas? Woof. The payoff is definitely worth it...
Mar 29, 2019
Anonymous
3/30/19, 11:51 AM
Love this.
3/30/19, 11:39 AM
I've been waiting until this series concludes to really comment, but I just can't hold back anymore. I LOVE THIS STORY! And I love it on multiple levels. I love it for what it is at face value -- a great genre story. It's effective and well-paced, beautifully written -- each chapter building on the last and "upping the ante" that much more. I was worried when Brody was introduced that we were going to fall into the "and now the same thing happens to the NEXT guy" trap in this kind of multiple part story, but by then end of this chapter, I was completely on-board! I guess I shouldn't have been surprised -- hypnothrill has proven himself enough times... But mostly, I love this story as an homage! He has not only taken my concept and used it beautifully, he's improved upon it and raised the excitement level that much higher. It is flattering and humbling and wonderful that it gets me off as completely as it does! Beautifully, beautifully done! Thank you so much!!!!!
Jan 20, 2007
Anonymous
3/30/19, 10:52 AM
always loved this. shame he didnt write any others
rubaluva
3/30/19, 9:34 AM
This is crying out for a part 2 :)
JR
3/30/19, 9:32 AM
I hope theres a part two. it would be nice to see Greg become a bottom who knows he's straight but can't help having sex.
rubaluva
3/30/19, 9:21 AM
Four years of waiting... sigh I hope you upload the next two chapters you've written soon :)
3/30/19, 6:39 AM
I always remember the later parts of this story, but I'd forgotten just how hot the early chapters are as well. That hotel room scene!
Mar 29, 2019
Anonymous
3/30/19, 5:35 AM
0 points > ***Admin***: One comment showing you're not happy is enough, no need to write three comments in a row to bash the author!
3/30/19, 3:34 AM
I like how you took criticism from the Sam part of the last story and rose to the challenge of writing an alternative. I liked the last story, but this you took and made awesome. Well done.