Recent Comments

Anonymous
3/29/19, 4:37 PM
For me one of the hottest stories here! Love the power dynamic and transformations on both sides. Hope there cums A LOT more!
3/29/19, 2:39 PM
This is shaping up quite well, like a sitcom or lighthearted erotic series; if they get compiled, have you considered marking them as "Season One"?
Anonymous
3/29/19, 2:34 PM
The writing is fine. I don't know what that one commenter was talking about.
Willie Cici
3/29/19, 2:30 PM
I went to the gym this morning, imagining which of the gym bunnies were on 'CycleOne'. When a story infiltrates reality, that's a great piece of writing. Hot, sexy and incredible. Always love reading your stories, Hyp. I can't wait to see how you resolve this story arc.
Jan 20, 2007
Kevin
3/29/19, 1:23 PM
like this strory
taylorthetako@gmail.com
3/29/19, 1:05 PM
really good.
TimNJ
3/29/19, 12:29 PM
On one hand I just want that orgy-like atmosphere to BECOME an actual orgy.....but this series is somehow hotter with just the tease. It has totally hooked me....and yes, I would be licking the inside of that CyclOne bottle for the last drop.
Anonymous
3/29/19, 11:15 AM
skin to skin 5 is probably one of my favorite stories on the site. I've gone back to it so many times! this has elements of that. i hope you continue to write you are so talented. and yes i agree i think its so sexy that you don't focus on the guys being these perfect men and just random guys that turn into sluts unexpectedly.
Anonymous
3/29/19, 11:07 AM
Wow. Would love to have more chunkier guys get fucked. keep the stories coming ! they are so hot and well written. I have a feeling the Asian guy is the master mind.
3/29/19, 9:03 AM
I really love your words and I love the way you create a fascinating character. Especially the religion involved.