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3/28/19, 2:14 PM
So much of this is organically developed, narratively speaking, that I was totally drawn in...including the unexpected twist ( I personally had "an unexpected twist" during a Scype session that turned out to be incredibly hot....). well done, and I hope to see more!
Anonymous
3/28/19, 1:38 PM
Oh, you should have made a story about jock big brother enslaved to his lil bro before u have disappeared.
3/28/19, 1:23 PM
This is one of those narratives that are better appreciated on a second reading, brcause I noticed the slow burn effect; to that end, I'm becoming gradually hungry for more....
Anonymous
3/28/19, 1:06 PM
I'd like if you turn Cody from an athletic handsome jock, into a redneck kind of character. Dirty, of course, but I'd like if instead of make him fat, you turn him into a squalid guy with disproportioned body (too big feet, big ears, big teeth out of place), so he could daydream of being as fat as his dad.
Anonymous
3/28/19, 11:44 AM
found myself almost wanting to try the gas , loving this series here
Anonymous
3/28/19, 11:28 AM
that is so hot ! can't wait for the son to get corrupted too
Anonymous
3/28/19, 10:44 AM
This was awesome! Can't wait to see more!
Anonymous
3/28/19, 10:02 AM
AI. amazing! I need to squish! please write more chapters
Anonymous
3/28/19, 9:51 AM
More, more, more
Anonymous
3/28/19, 9:37 AM
AMAZING! All this iteration where just a pleasure to read