Recent Comments

Evan
3/28/19, 9:48 PM
I'm really loving this series. And seeing our hero lose control was extra hot knowing he normally broken free before anything happened. Who was videoing and why. The mystery deepens. Though I have my suspicions. Thank you for writing this series!
Anonymous
3/28/19, 9:36 PM
will this became a series? this has a lot of
firesix
3/28/19, 9:33 PM
More! And more about nipples as well. That turns me on so much for whatever reason.
3/28/19, 6:48 PM
This whole series and both endings were amazing. Don't stop writing. You've got a real knack for it. :)
Anonymous
3/28/19, 2:36 PM
More! MORE! Please I need More!!!!!
3/28/19, 2:14 PM
So much of this is organically developed, narratively speaking, that I was totally drawn in...including the unexpected twist ( I personally had "an unexpected twist" during a Scype session that turned out to be incredibly hot....). well done, and I hope to see more!
Anonymous
3/28/19, 1:38 PM
Oh, you should have made a story about jock big brother enslaved to his lil bro before u have disappeared.
3/28/19, 1:23 PM
This is one of those narratives that are better appreciated on a second reading, brcause I noticed the slow burn effect; to that end, I'm becoming gradually hungry for more....
Anonymous
3/28/19, 1:06 PM
I'd like if you turn Cody from an athletic handsome jock, into a redneck kind of character. Dirty, of course, but I'd like if instead of make him fat, you turn him into a squalid guy with disproportioned body (too big feet, big ears, big teeth out of place), so he could daydream of being as fat as his dad.
Anonymous
3/28/19, 11:44 AM
found myself almost wanting to try the gas , loving this series here