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bicuriousm4M@gmx.com
3/28/19, 7:26 AM
MMmm no matter how many times I read this story, I wind up a panting quivering mess that would love to experience what Carlito is
3/28/19, 6:51 AM
off to a great start. At first, it seemed a bit too underdeveloped, but on a second pass, I got real aroused., really fast. Looking forward to seeing how much farther it can go.
Anonymous
3/28/19, 6:40 AM
Great story and great twist at the end
Nico
3/28/19, 6:12 AM
I'm with everyone else. in the end, holliday needs to be in control
3/28/19, 5:43 AM
mmm...getting hungry..... "..Please, sir...may I have some more?"
3/28/19, 5:29 AM
Absolutely brilliant! I could read these entries for hours on end, and drift off, having them permeate my dreams . There is so much more to come, if you would....
Anonymous
3/28/19, 5:06 AM
pleeeease do more
3/28/19, 4:38 AM
This story's based off a [Tumblr post I made in 2016](https://bodriversblog.tumblr.com/post/153761234249/it-was-a-stupid-dare-and-you-were-a), using a pic I photoshopped with tats, and muscle morphing that I tried to keep realistic. Here I focus on the hypnosis that was only barely hinted at originally, but if you wanna get a sneak peak at what's in store for "You," the character, I'm using pretty much everything from the original post. Except names being on rugby jerseys (I'm embarassed now that I've actually learned the sport). Plus I'm really gonna flesh out what happens to "You" over the next year, during his descent into owned Meathead-dom. @ChronoSeth I had several chapters outlined, but I actually plan to update JNW with a rewritten first installment. I can tell you right now I plan on updating all the fashions on the characters, but there were some bigger problems that also needed to be fixed.
3/28/19, 3:51 AM
Great story. Fantastic transformation, esp the voidless of taste corn becoming the voidless Kyle mind. And very well written. It was a joy to read. Now time for some popcorn...I'm hoping.
Kevin
3/28/19, 3:42 AM
great story