Recent Comments

Kevin
3/28/19, 3:42 AM
great story
Arachnus The Spider
3/28/19, 2:42 AM
I thought I was being pretty equitable between the two men. *shrug* I welcome the criticism, but as for bad writing, you would need to be more specific. Otherwise it's impossible to address. I did go ahead and threw the end digression out because I sensed that might have to do with it. It was self-indulgent, I know. But all of this is. Update should reflect the change soon.
3/28/19, 2:37 AM
Wondering if you can also continue The Jock, The Nerd and The Wizard
Anonymous
3/28/19, 2:19 AM
won't lie, I'd be Brody
Anonymous
3/28/19, 2:15 AM
I'd probably be a Darius or the Third option. But anyway, The sudden change of focus was a bit jarring. The start was completely transitioned well but then it was lost at the time Brody became the focus. It's a minor thing. But bad writing is a turn off for me... Which thankfully isn't common in this site.
M
3/28/19, 1:01 AM
So fucking hot!!! I loved the story and the twist at the end. I agree with everybody about the story having a part 2. I missed you here too. I always have been fan of your stories.
Anonymous
3/28/19, 12:36 AM
Nothing like a good alien infestation. And, using the baseball team thoroughly enhanced for me.
Anonymous
3/27/19, 11:32 PM
yes more!
3/27/19, 11:19 PM
LOVEDthis, my friend! How about finding out exactlywhat happened when Russ got carted off?
3/27/19, 10:28 PM
Thanks for fixing the links, Martin. I think it got screwed up when the website transitioned to the current one. I think you can also delete the very first "installment" (the story link that's only titled "Family Matters" without any chapter numbers). It was simply the very original submission of this story, where I sent Chapters 1&2 as one document. Since both chapters are now reposted individually, this old version is perhaps not needed anymore. Thanks!