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3/28/19, 5:29 AM
Absolutely brilliant! I could read these entries for hours on end, and drift off, having them permeate my dreams . There is so much more to come, if you would....
Anonymous
3/28/19, 5:06 AM
pleeeease do more
3/28/19, 4:38 AM
This story's based off a [Tumblr post I made in 2016](https://bodriversblog.tumblr.com/post/153761234249/it-was-a-stupid-dare-and-you-were-a), using a pic I photoshopped with tats, and muscle morphing that I tried to keep realistic. Here I focus on the hypnosis that was only barely hinted at originally, but if you wanna get a sneak peak at what's in store for "You," the character, I'm using pretty much everything from the original post. Except names being on rugby jerseys (I'm embarassed now that I've actually learned the sport). Plus I'm really gonna flesh out what happens to "You" over the next year, during his descent into owned Meathead-dom. @ChronoSeth I had several chapters outlined, but I actually plan to update JNW with a rewritten first installment. I can tell you right now I plan on updating all the fashions on the characters, but there were some bigger problems that also needed to be fixed.
3/28/19, 3:51 AM
Great story. Fantastic transformation, esp the voidless of taste corn becoming the voidless Kyle mind. And very well written. It was a joy to read. Now time for some popcorn...I'm hoping.
Kevin
3/28/19, 3:42 AM
great story
Arachnus The Spider
3/28/19, 2:42 AM
I thought I was being pretty equitable between the two men. *shrug* I welcome the criticism, but as for bad writing, you would need to be more specific. Otherwise it's impossible to address. I did go ahead and threw the end digression out because I sensed that might have to do with it. It was self-indulgent, I know. But all of this is. Update should reflect the change soon.
3/28/19, 2:37 AM
Wondering if you can also continue The Jock, The Nerd and The Wizard
Anonymous
3/28/19, 2:19 AM
won't lie, I'd be Brody
Anonymous
3/28/19, 2:15 AM
I'd probably be a Darius or the Third option. But anyway, The sudden change of focus was a bit jarring. The start was completely transitioned well but then it was lost at the time Brody became the focus. It's a minor thing. But bad writing is a turn off for me... Which thankfully isn't common in this site.
M
3/28/19, 1:01 AM
So fucking hot!!! I loved the story and the twist at the end. I agree with everybody about the story having a part 2. I missed you here too. I always have been fan of your stories.