Recent Comments

Anonymous
3/28/19, 2:15 AM
I'd probably be a Darius or the Third option. But anyway, The sudden change of focus was a bit jarring. The start was completely transitioned well but then it was lost at the time Brody became the focus. It's a minor thing. But bad writing is a turn off for me... Which thankfully isn't common in this site.
M
3/28/19, 1:01 AM
So fucking hot!!! I loved the story and the twist at the end. I agree with everybody about the story having a part 2. I missed you here too. I always have been fan of your stories.
Anonymous
3/28/19, 12:36 AM
Nothing like a good alien infestation. And, using the baseball team thoroughly enhanced for me.
Anonymous
3/27/19, 11:32 PM
yes more!
3/27/19, 11:19 PM
LOVEDthis, my friend! How about finding out exactlywhat happened when Russ got carted off?
3/27/19, 10:28 PM
Thanks for fixing the links, Martin. I think it got screwed up when the website transitioned to the current one. I think you can also delete the very first "installment" (the story link that's only titled "Family Matters" without any chapter numbers). It was simply the very original submission of this story, where I sent Chapters 1&2 as one document. Since both chapters are now reposted individually, this old version is perhaps not needed anymore. Thanks!
nycboot
3/27/19, 8:46 PM
Lovely! I wished Aidan's transformation had been slower and more detailed. But then, maybe that kind of transformation is being saved for the sequel. :)
Bign54@gmail.com
3/27/19, 8:30 PM
When is the next chapter coming?
ForgottenCradle
3/27/19, 8:22 PM
I like the coach getting involved Is this spreading throughout the entire school now?
3/27/19, 8:07 PM
CYCLE ONE didn't "start" here -- I'd written that story several years before this one -- but I couldn't resist the temptation to make a "shared universe" between these two continuities. It added an interesting dimension to both and acted a bit like an "Easter Egg" for long-time readers. (Mostly, I just thought I was clever as fuck when I thought of it.)