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Anonymous
3/27/19, 11:32 PM
yes more!
3/27/19, 11:19 PM
LOVEDthis, my friend! How about finding out exactlywhat happened when Russ got carted off?
3/27/19, 10:28 PM
Thanks for fixing the links, Martin. I think it got screwed up when the website transitioned to the current one. I think you can also delete the very first "installment" (the story link that's only titled "Family Matters" without any chapter numbers). It was simply the very original submission of this story, where I sent Chapters 1&2 as one document. Since both chapters are now reposted individually, this old version is perhaps not needed anymore. Thanks!
nycboot
3/27/19, 8:46 PM
Lovely! I wished Aidan's transformation had been slower and more detailed. But then, maybe that kind of transformation is being saved for the sequel. :)
Bign54@gmail.com
3/27/19, 8:30 PM
When is the next chapter coming?
ForgottenCradle
3/27/19, 8:22 PM
I like the coach getting involved Is this spreading throughout the entire school now?
3/27/19, 8:07 PM
CYCLE ONE didn't "start" here -- I'd written that story several years before this one -- but I couldn't resist the temptation to make a "shared universe" between these two continuities. It added an interesting dimension to both and acted a bit like an "Easter Egg" for long-time readers. (Mostly, I just thought I was clever as fuck when I thought of it.)
3/27/19, 7:59 PM
No kidding, I'm so flattered this "franchise" has such a big fan base! It's been a while since I've taken on a work as complex as this and I'm having a blast -- so I'm glad you're having a blast, too! As someone who's been writing this type of story for over twenty-years, I worry about becoming my own cliche, just doing the same thing over and over again. When I talk to/ hear from fans -- and LONGTIME fans, especially -- it gives me such great energy to continue. So thank YOU -- and believe me, I'm five chapters ahead and I'm telling you everything pays off beautifully. I know this story starts kind of slow -- sexually -- but once it goes, it goes!
Willie Cici
3/27/19, 6:26 PM
I almost never see the 'episodic' side of the stories I write. If anyone has suggestions for storyline 'next chapters', I'd be interested in reading them. Write me a comment with your suggestions. Thanks.
anonymous4ox
3/27/19, 6:14 PM
I can't believe it, your new edits made a story I thought was as hot as it could get EVEN HOTTER! Jesus Christ dude you need to continue writing, you're amazing.