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six_dead106
3/27/19, 12:37 PM
AMAZING! God I missed your stories !
3/27/19, 6:30 AM
Just so novel...a new take on the trope....although Iagree that the transition, once the protagonist was necklaced, could've taken some more time. It's truly brilliant,and I'll be contemplating it for a while to come.
3/27/19, 6:01 AM
Thanks again, everyone! Glad you're enjoying it as much as me. :) Although I did already have something in mind, I'll be including some of the suggestions/ideas in the comments here in part 2 for the next chapter. So, thanks for those as well. I'm pleased that both times there have been requests for a haircut scene. Youi got it. :) @nerdysuitedbaby I had really been enjoying erasing the boy's sense of self and identity entirely. Wiped, er...popped out of existence. But I can definitely see it your way as well. There's a preppification story on CYOC like that, in fact. Yes, I can see the appeal of being a helpless screaming prisoner. Expect it to show up. :) But not with Grizz/Chip. He's *only* Chip now. >:)
Martin
3/27/19, 5:59 AM
I've tried to fix this series by adding all chapters and giving them the correct order. I hope it's correct now.
Anonymous
3/27/19, 5:44 AM
wat happened to the first two chaps??
Anonymous
3/27/19, 4:16 AM
I'm hard. Still. Fucking awesome!!! More!!!!!
Mar 26, 2019
Anonymous
3/27/19, 4:14 AM
I really enjoyed this story. Interesting twist!!
Anonymous
3/27/19, 4:13 AM
I checked out the site. Funny shit!! Loved the story! Another classic!
Mar 26, 2019
Anonymous
3/27/19, 3:50 AM
Heh.. nice twist at the end. It does kind of imply that Devon was fully hypnotized all along, and all of his 'own thoughts' about always having been gay and loving Nathan and being into bears.. about the girls he met being 'just friends'.. has been put into his mind after Nathan decided he wanted Devon as a bf rather than pet . Though could also just be that all of that was true for Devon from the start and its just the pup hypnosis that stuck with him without realizing.
3/27/19, 3:15 AM
The audio-indoctrination motif was engaging, although I think that it'd be coler if the internal process of what the subjects were going through would've made it much hotter. Loved the elaborate construction of the rooms and halls...the constant reference of symbols and phrases. Overall, an excellent job!