Recent Comments

Dodger
3/27/19, 2:34 PM
I've always loved your work/writing style. I just stumbled onto this website and am ecstatic to see you continue a great story. Can't wait for the next chapter.
3/27/19, 1:48 PM
This is great, but it's begging for a sequel!
Anonymous
3/27/19, 1:24 PM
wow, this was damn hot!
six_dead106
3/27/19, 12:37 PM
AMAZING! God I missed your stories !
3/27/19, 6:30 AM
Just so novel...a new take on the trope....although Iagree that the transition, once the protagonist was necklaced, could've taken some more time. It's truly brilliant,and I'll be contemplating it for a while to come.
3/27/19, 6:01 AM
Thanks again, everyone! Glad you're enjoying it as much as me. :) Although I did already have something in mind, I'll be including some of the suggestions/ideas in the comments here in part 2 for the next chapter. So, thanks for those as well. I'm pleased that both times there have been requests for a haircut scene. Youi got it. :) @nerdysuitedbaby I had really been enjoying erasing the boy's sense of self and identity entirely. Wiped, er...popped out of existence. But I can definitely see it your way as well. There's a preppification story on CYOC like that, in fact. Yes, I can see the appeal of being a helpless screaming prisoner. Expect it to show up. :) But not with Grizz/Chip. He's *only* Chip now. >:)
Martin
3/27/19, 5:59 AM
I've tried to fix this series by adding all chapters and giving them the correct order. I hope it's correct now.
Anonymous
3/27/19, 5:44 AM
wat happened to the first two chaps??
Anonymous
3/27/19, 4:16 AM
I'm hard. Still. Fucking awesome!!! More!!!!!
Mar 26, 2019
Anonymous
3/27/19, 4:14 AM
I really enjoyed this story. Interesting twist!!