Recent Comments

3/26/19, 9:39 PM
Ok... I'd worship there.
3/26/19, 8:31 PM
Now, this is some boffo world-building....and...just a bit incidently,,,hot as hell!
3/26/19, 8:11 PM
I'm erect just thinking about it later...
Vicbiguy
3/26/19, 8:09 PM
Dang, Willie, another great story and now I want to join this cult!
Anonymous
3/26/19, 8:02 PM
This series is incredible; thank you for it. I look forward to anything else you might write.
3/26/19, 7:47 PM
Yes I totally agree a far better ending - Thank you
Anonymous
3/26/19, 7:37 PM
Hottttt. More please!
3/26/19, 7:15 PM
Oh yeah, this alternate ending is a LOT better! I love all the scenes in the police station and the diner, plus the world domination element!
3/26/19, 6:12 PM
for me personally i found this chapter a bit disappointing i was eager to find out what Kyle was listening to, with Damien conversion i would have liked to have seen Kyle as part of it, once he was under. please do not take this as a criticism. I know personally how hard it is to write as a fellow writer, you had the balls to put hands to keyboard
Derek Williams
3/26/19, 4:53 PM
This is really well done bro. Can’t wait for the next instalment.