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hypnominion
3/26/19, 9:57 AM
Checked out the site....fascinating stuff...
3/26/19, 9:55 AM
@Hypnominion I'm all for it! i'm super-glad I inspired you! I've only had one bad experience with "fan-fic" -- someone wanted to write in my "NEW SUPERMEN" universe and I said, "OK, just leave Character X alone -- I have plans for him in a sequel." Then, when the dude's work posted, the entire story focused on Character X! When I complained, he was glib and patronizing about it, so understandably, I've been reluctant to play w other writers -- especially because I'm so respectful in my own tribute writing. That's another reason I love Hynothrill's take on this universe. It's super-hot AND respectful of my work. Great author! WELL DONE!!!
3/26/19, 8:40 AM
This was just...well...fun!! Like the other posters, I'mimterested in seeing how/if Jim survives the situation,andam curious about the parents'reactions (orzrethey in on it?)
3/26/19, 6:52 AM
Simply splendid. The video descriptions are wonderful.
david
3/26/19, 6:40 AM
What's wrong with me?! i just read how Kyle went down for the count, and i want to know exactly what Kyle was thinking and feeling as his mind shut down!! Since i guess i won't be able to really experience this, or Kyle's ensuing training and life on the farm, it seems my best chance is to read chapter 2, and 3, and 4, and so on & on! This wasn't just a story; it was a really sexy and somehow horrible experience. i hope i've made it clear just how how bad i am needing to read more. i am counting on you, Mr. Sandman, so please, bring me a dream!
3/26/19, 6:40 AM
An absolutely incredible tale....sooo hot....so much like the fantasies I had while maturbating when I first began working out and capitalized on the endorphins. I understand that Hypnothrill constructed astory set in the same continuity; if you'll permit, I might try my hand at it, as well...
Anonymous
3/26/19, 5:51 AM
I love this series!! Hope there's more to cum!! ;3
Hypnominion
3/26/19, 4:53 AM
I'm finding the whole procedural aspect of this work to be endlessly engaging...very similar to the process-oriented narrative structures of my own masturbatory fantasies(by doing them one step at a time, tne fantasy material can be stretched out over a greater number of sessions). Well done, my friend, and I'm looking forward to more chapters... : )
3/26/19, 3:07 AM
I just realized that many of you guys probably aren't aware that Absman420 wrote a very hot sequel, "Cycle One: Target Two." Here's a link for all who are interested: https://archive2007.muscle-growth.org/stories/1260.html. When Max and Cal have their offscreen shower sex scene in my story (and Max comes out of the shower bigger), I'm paying homage to a very hot shower scene in "Target Two."
Hypnominion
3/26/19, 1:50 AM
You've just made me re ad the story upon which this one is based, having ...thanks to you...become obsessed with the universe!! much love!