Recent Comments

david
3/26/19, 6:40 AM
What's wrong with me?! i just read how Kyle went down for the count, and i want to know exactly what Kyle was thinking and feeling as his mind shut down!! Since i guess i won't be able to really experience this, or Kyle's ensuing training and life on the farm, it seems my best chance is to read chapter 2, and 3, and 4, and so on & on! This wasn't just a story; it was a really sexy and somehow horrible experience. i hope i've made it clear just how how bad i am needing to read more. i am counting on you, Mr. Sandman, so please, bring me a dream!
3/26/19, 6:40 AM
An absolutely incredible tale....sooo hot....so much like the fantasies I had while maturbating when I first began working out and capitalized on the endorphins. I understand that Hypnothrill constructed astory set in the same continuity; if you'll permit, I might try my hand at it, as well...
Anonymous
3/26/19, 5:51 AM
I love this series!! Hope there's more to cum!! ;3
Hypnominion
3/26/19, 4:53 AM
I'm finding the whole procedural aspect of this work to be endlessly engaging...very similar to the process-oriented narrative structures of my own masturbatory fantasies(by doing them one step at a time, tne fantasy material can be stretched out over a greater number of sessions). Well done, my friend, and I'm looking forward to more chapters... : )
3/26/19, 3:07 AM
I just realized that many of you guys probably aren't aware that Absman420 wrote a very hot sequel, "Cycle One: Target Two." Here's a link for all who are interested: https://archive2007.muscle-growth.org/stories/1260.html. When Max and Cal have their offscreen shower sex scene in my story (and Max comes out of the shower bigger), I'm paying homage to a very hot shower scene in "Target Two."
Hypnominion
3/26/19, 1:50 AM
You've just made me re ad the story upon which this one is based, having ...thanks to you...become obsessed with the universe!! much love!
Hypnominion
3/26/19, 1:45 AM
This is an amazing work...virtually a clinic on construction of mind-alteration narratives. And...in case it needsto be said...HOT AS FUCK!!! Would love more chapters...
Anonymous
3/26/19, 12:59 AM
waiting for part 3
Anonymous
3/26/19, 12:57 AM
can this continue, please?
Anonymous
3/26/19, 12:21 AM
it will be cool to read the weird loving-comfort mixed with rough dominance that Darius will treat the castration with. that was my favorite part of the last chapter, that weird way it was almost warm and romantic, even with all the forced fucked up changes and behaviors.