Recent Comments

LongtimeFan
3/25/19, 8:11 AM
Another brilliant chapter! Love the descriptions of the mindless preppy drones--and you also have a great gift for dialogue. Thanks for sharing this amazing piece!
Anonymous
3/25/19, 7:41 AM
I definitely think Naoto is the one controlling the team. Can't wait for more!
Anonymous
3/24/19, 9:43 PM
the plot thickens
3/24/19, 9:25 PM
Yep, still coming back to this story all these years later.
3/24/19, 9:16 PM
My dick's rock hard after reading it. There's the proof...
Martin
3/24/19, 9:00 PM
Wow! I love stories like this! Please find your muse soon!
Anonymous
3/24/19, 8:37 PM
Excellent work
3/24/19, 8:17 PM
Thank you all so much for the comments, this was my first serious attempt at an erotic story like this so I'm still working out the 'kinks'. There will be a part 2, possibly more depending on how my my muse feels, and I should have that second part out soon.
Anonymous
3/24/19, 7:19 PM
Promising start! Loving racial transformations. also hope to see more detailed transformations.
Anonymous
3/24/19, 7:08 PM
This story is *so hot* it set me on fire! I am amazed that the hotness rating isn't right at the top. The whole farm scene truly seems straight out of a horror movie. All the previous comments are so right on! I love this story, its characters, and am so so hoping there will be more chapters coming.