Recent Comments

Anonymous
3/23/19, 2:24 PM
getting better every story
tfmrph33@yahoo.com
3/23/19, 1:14 PM
I enjoyed this quite a bit. I always love some good race changes. I think you missed some opportunity with the South Asian for some facial features description. I didn't know what race he was becoming until you said he looked South Asian. Half of race changes to me is the facial features changing. Would have been nice to have more descriptors there. Look forward to the next chapter to see what else changed under those clothes :P
Anonymous
3/23/19, 12:54 PM
Its the water boy right? Or is it the coach?
Anonymous
3/23/19, 12:06 PM
nice! please do some coach scenes too!
Anonymous
3/23/19, 7:30 AM
I'm loving it
ForgottenCradle
3/23/19, 5:22 AM
sometimes I just need these raunchy series to keep me going
3/23/19, 5:01 AM
It is such a sexy story. I love the gassing and the focus on the butt. That said, I do think a bit more buttplay would be great. My one bit of sadness is the seeming total destruction of the self in those effected.
ForgottenCradle
3/23/19, 3:42 AM
oh,I really like the idea for this chapter
3/23/19, 2:57 AM
@degoetz Musclehead can be read over at [https://mcstories.com/Musclehead/index.html](https://mcstories.com/Musclehead/index.html) with two more hot installments by Hypnothrill over at [https://www.gayspiralstories.com/newSeries/show/7856 ](https://www.gayspiralstories.com/newSeries/show/7856 ) and I highly recommend checking them out if you're into this stuff @Wesley Bracken Yeah, I think mind control's the main thing but TF is great! Not so much reality change, but I imagine whenever Grandpa gasses someone, he could totally "suggest" changes to their current state. Fatter, hairier, muscles, tattoos, clothes, accessories, etc. Physical changes along with the mental. Maybe I'll demonstrate that in my next chapter.
3/23/19, 12:39 AM
Just out of curiosity, do you see this story being more focused on just mind control, or would it be alright to incorporate some transformation elements as well? You know, just in case inspiration strikes.