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Anonymous
3/21/19, 12:34 PM
intriguing. keep them coming :)
Anonymous
3/21/19, 12:04 PM
Can't wait for the next chapter!
Mar 20, 2019
Anonymous
3/21/19, 11:52 AM
Since you asked for feedback: Some of the pronoun usage (and use of hair color in lieu of name) made who was doing what to whom was a little hard to follow. But otherwise really hot.
3/21/19, 10:16 AM
@nerdysuitedbaby Thanks for the suggestions. :) Though I didn't mean to suggest I didn't have any. I just wanted to let y'all know that it may not be the exact same each time in case that's what they expected. I've got something planned. ;) @Max Thanks for your suggestions, too. Glad you liked it.
Anonymous
3/21/19, 8:31 AM
Cyclone challenge will be a meme : )
LongtimeFan
3/21/19, 6:37 AM
It's a match made in heaven--Absman and Hypnothrill! This is already fantastic; you do a phenomenal job of capturing the spirit of every fitness vlogger EVER. :p Can't wait to see what comes next! :D
Anonymous
3/21/19, 4:40 AM
OK, I'm really interested and this is pretty hot, with just the right amount of raunch. I think you're doing fine in spreading the narrative information out among the sex scenes.
Mar 20, 2019
SlutJock18
3/21/19, 4:37 AM
Great story!! Need a chapter where the three sluts went shopping for their slut gear Then they start wearing around the frat house. Enticing them to fuck them. When they do.they too will become cocksluts
nerdysuitedbaby
3/21/19, 3:52 AM
@PreppifiedGuy I don't mean follow another carbon copy chapter. He has friends, maybe other family members that go there for a birthday or something, or another guy. Could be passing through town and is hungry, someone ducks in to hide out, someone accidentally goes to the barber shop, or maybe his friend(s) come by and see the new him and try to snap him out and gets preppified himself. There is food, jukebox, haircut, maybe being surrounded by preps does something, maybe it's Chad or the shop keep. Have a few methods I see. Just my 2 cents. I'm saying it felt like Chad was aware and to see maybe he sticks directly to the non-prep side saying this is quiet an improvement and say you must be hating this. Like torment them directly or at least a main preppy. Or to see sometimes in will so strong it can't be fully taken away but forced to sit as a spectator of his now preppy life and seeing him grow to just accept it and miserably watch his life play out. You could also branch out to getting more employees for the diner. FYI I'm just giving you some examples to let your own creative juices flow you feel free to come up with your own or use and tweak mine if you need. I help a few people with writers block and editing on here, Tumblr and patreon. So like to lend a helping hand when I can.
3/21/19, 3:40 AM
Very good. I share your appreciation for baseball players. Woof!