Recent Comments

Max
3/20/19, 8:41 AM
This is an amazing story - two suggestions: 1) since you said you wanted to change up the chapters, maybe focus one chapter on how a ruffian starts to feel better about himself AS he changes - maybe he has memories of his former identity but his thinking changes and he realizes being a clean cut prep is much better for his self-esteem, attitude, life, etc! 2) maybe focus a chapter on haircut (and shaving) -- and how different the boy looks as his hair is cut shorter, combed - and his facial hair (if he has some) is shaved off -- does it open up his face more, make him look older vs younger? etc. very hot ;)
Martin
3/20/19, 7:39 AM
To add to UchihaDEMS' comment: The series (as listed on the main page) will always inherit the tags from all stories combined.
Anonymous
3/20/19, 4:34 AM
This was so hot! Please make more
Anonymous
3/20/19, 4:07 AM
This was so hot! Please make more
ember
3/20/19, 4:02 AM
this was glorious. super hype to see where this one goes!
3/20/19, 3:37 AM
This is a hot story, but I think it would have been a lot hotter if we'd gotten more detail about what's going on in Mason's head. Why is his first response to grab his camera and film this fuck-fest? Is he planning on blackmailing his teammates? Does he find it funny and he wants to tease them? Erotic and he plans to jerk off to the footage later? Disturbing and he plans to take the footage to the police? And then why does he suddenly join in the orgy? Again, it would be so hot if you depicted his attitude changing and his growing arousal as he got closer to the boys. But this is still a great start and I'm eager to see where it goes.
Anonymous
3/20/19, 3:15 AM
love it !
MeddlerIncs
3/20/19, 2:46 AM
An oldie but a goodie. I still jerk off to this story - and anything really you and FanTCdude written really. XD
UchihaDEMS
3/20/19, 2:10 AM
You have to tag only for the part wise, on the other one, you use the ones corresponding to that part...
Anonymous
3/20/19, 12:55 AM
could have used some more struggle on Billy's part against his changes. Hopefully a wrestling-jock bearified Isaac gets his way with the boi soon.