Recent Comments

Anonymous
3/17/19, 12:09 PM
love this!! Can't wait for Isaac's part!
Anonymous
3/17/19, 12:00 PM
I wish there had been some points of view from the players.. but this is good nonetheless
Anonymous
3/17/19, 10:53 AM
Incredible concept and t needs more chapters! Let's try to limit the usage of parentheses - (not a paragraph goes by without a distractingly verbose aside.)
3/17/19, 10:21 AM
I actually had to look that reference up!
3/17/19, 10:15 AM
Thank you! After all these years, I still get some of my best feedback on this piece. Glad it holds up!
Anonymous
3/17/19, 9:56 AM
I hope this becomes a series
Anonymous
3/17/19, 9:51 AM
so, this is going to be a series?, nice
Anonymous
3/17/19, 9:49 AM
it seems this is going to be a series, nice
Mar 13, 2019
ForgottenCradle
3/17/19, 9:47 AM
my GOD,this is hot more to come,please
ForgottenCradle
3/17/19, 9:24 AM
I'm not even into feet,but this story is so amazingly written. I love it