Recent Comments

Anonymous
3/13/19, 2:56 PM
Great story!!! Loved it!!!
Anonymous
3/13/19, 2:55 PM
This was a great story, in substance. Writing the way you speak sometimes makes the writing weak, but in this story, it helps the narrative along. I enjoyed it. The problem with the request -- to develop a series --- is this: gov't sends a letter; person responds to the program; turns gay; has sex; makes declaration --- every chapter is going to have some form of this story line. I don't know you keep that fresh. I'm not saying don't try. I'm just saying I'm skeptical. Having said all that: write. I'll read it.
Anonymous
3/13/19, 2:54 PM
Hot. I hope you keep writing more.
cocky
3/13/19, 2:26 PM
fuckin hot dude****
Anonymous
3/13/19, 1:56 PM
I can't wait for the next one! This is hot!
Donn
3/13/19, 11:15 AM
Invasion of the Body Snatchers
Anonymous
3/13/19, 10:28 AM
desperately hoping this is only chapter one...
sexcrab
3/13/19, 7:32 AM
I was the only one who realized that you disappeared with Ladarell AKA Cody after introducing him? By the way, the initial intention was to write about him, so you lost interest but you ultimately forgot to erase him 100% from this story. I'm only theorizing.
Anonymous
3/13/19, 6:44 AM
Yes please please continue this story
3/13/19, 6:23 AM
This story is hot - I really enjoyed it - thanks for writing it. It ends a little prematurely in my opinion - it would have been good to round things off with Ron's transformation. The narrative voice is excellent - it sounds very authentic, but the narrator hints that although he was straight at the time, he has since gotten into guys. It would have been good to hear about that, too...