Recent Comments

Anonymous
3/13/19, 12:33 AM
More please, I always enjoy bottom to top stories.
Anonymous
3/13/19, 12:20 AM
I'm Hot all over
3/13/19, 12:15 AM
The "s" is purely a typo that, oddly, doesn't exist in my own copy. I must have hit a keystroke when entering it. I'm glade people are enjoying it. There is certainly more action to come. This chapter was a bit shorter because the next part of the story really shouldn't be interrupted by a chapter break and then it become excessively long, in my opinion. I like keeping the chapter's succinct without too many sexual scenes, that way the story sandwhiched between them can be appreciated (and not overlooked in sexual fugue).
Anonymous
3/12/19, 11:47 PM
That "s" at the end makes me think there might have been more that should have been posted? Either way looking forward to more as well!
TheD
3/12/19, 8:45 PM
Great continuation! I hope we'll see what happens with the three (or more?) of them SOON!
Anonymous
3/12/19, 8:26 PM
Awesome work Thanks
Anonymous
3/12/19, 4:52 PM
Glad to see you're back. Really like how Zach's curse affects the men around him.
Boston Satyr
3/12/19, 4:24 PM
I like the Zach story line, & the affect he has on other men. I hope you'll include him more in your story line. PLUS more scenes of Fashaad getting rid of interuptions, like he did with that intrusive waiter... ;-)
Anonymous
3/12/19, 3:17 PM
nice shorter chapter. I liked it a lot. I just wish there bad been more action in Brendan and Jake's household.
AeonFlux@hotmail.de
3/12/19, 2:56 PM
Yes, please more. .....