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10/31/24, 6:21 AM
I like your writing but I had a bit of trouble with the suspension of disbelief for this. I think maybe if it had been you can't touch my dick without turning gay. Like MC turning around ready to take it was kinda just funny.
Anonymous
12/20/15, 2:55 PM
Still hoping for karma here...nice story though just that Alex is too unforgiving to turn me on...

Anonymous
10/31/24, 5:36 AM
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10/31/24, 4:31 AM
I've got a few days off coming up so I'm hoping to get the next update out over the weekend.
Anonymous
10/31/24, 3:44 AM
This was a great first story. I would have appreciated a little more physical description of the bartender. Hope to see more stories from you!
10/31/24, 2:32 AM
I wish there was more.
10/31/24, 2:15 AM
More please more..thiago muuuuu!!! I want to be part of sweet home!!. be a piñata mmmmuyyy helpful to the love ones. Excellent story, I congratulate you, I want to see more 🦬🦬🐾🖤👏👏❤❤
10/31/24, 2:05 AM
I love these stories and the ideas behind them. The header on thus one mentions it's inspired by a similar one on this site. Can anyone point me to it?
Mar 2, 2017
10/31/24, 1:33 AM
I never knew fat werewolves could be so hot!
Anonymous
10/31/24, 12:52 AM
Love ittt.
Hypnominion
10/31/24, 12:50 AM
I found the premise of coming in midway through the encounter, no knowing what came before (inviting a flashback), and wondering what comes next, to be as engaging as the transition, itself (which was quite well-crafted, BTW). I'd recommend developing a precursor narrative, giving the reader more insight as to who Brysen Hawk (GREAT name!) is, before hos transformation; also, I'd like some inclusion as to how/why the Skinhead uses cannabis instead of the stereotypical meth, even if it's a passing throwaway line acknowledging the difference (thus satisfying those who see it as problematic); perhaps it's a part of the mind control, and was used in the flashback sequences leading up to his arrival at the Skinhead's place...?