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3/11/19, 3:50 PM
This was extremely hot. I really enjoyed the POV and the characters as well. Whether this is a One-Shot or they will be more was a very enjoyable story to read. One of the things I will add is that I would really like to learn more about the characters and the certain personality traits you mentioned about them.
Anonymous
3/11/19, 3:15 PM
Hotttt! Love those dark twists.
Anonymous
3/11/19, 1:03 PM
Really good! I like it when the tables are turned. Shame it was only a vignette though.
Anonymous
3/11/19, 12:38 PM
wow! that was great! really nice writing for each other. thanks a lot for sharing
Anonymous
3/11/19, 9:07 AM
Very hot hypnosis. I can't believe how amazing it is to see you writing again. I hope there's lots more on the way :)
Anonymous
3/11/19, 7:49 AM
ahh I love Kaa.
Anonymous
3/11/19, 6:24 AM
Cool to see a story like this with some contrast. Love to see a daddy bear doing this sort of twinkification thing. When it's just twinks-making-twinks, it's not 1/4 as hot. Contrast!
Anonymous
3/11/19, 4:43 AM
please continue
Family Dom
3/11/19, 12:37 AM
Oh no. Holliday needs to dominate this family. 😮
Cigarboy Cody
3/11/19, 12:30 AM
Not only would the subs give you"Rock hard boy. It would also give you" Growth boy" Who's power is to make anything grow.anything. Remember any villians that wanted to rule the future,had to go through some form of Universo Are the Wanderers,or the heros of Llaror( or however you spell it) going to make an appearance? I know that the 70's was the decade of disco,finding yourself,etc.etc.but how on Earth did Mike Grell's costumes ever make it past the censors? I think his name was Tyrok. That white costume left little to the imagination. Was it because he was the first black member of the Legion? Have you ever thought about doing a story on APOLLO and Midnighter being corrupted,then going after the other heros in their continuity?