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3/9/19, 5:06 PM
The Subs? Don't I have enough to do? (Although, it WOULD let me end up with "Rock Hard Boy", wouldn't it?)
Martin
3/9/19, 3:39 PM
If it's a continuation of path 1.1, it would be 1.1.1 If it's an alternative path to 1.1, it would be 1.2 If it's an all new path it would be 2
Anonymous
3/9/19, 3:08 PM
Nice job!! Good message!!!
3/9/19, 3:04 PM
Personally I didn't realize it was a WRITE your own adventure when I read the first chapter. We'll need defined naming conventions for when people want to go back a path. a direct sequel should be 1.2 or 1.1b?
Hypnojock18
3/9/19, 2:58 PM
COACH!! This hero jock is ready to join the team and be a good hero jock!! My name COACH? I am the edger.i stop villians by taking them to the edge of the ultimate pleasure and leave them there. Yes COACH i can use my power to bring anyone to you COACH,and help you COACH make them hero jocks for the team
Cigarboy Cody
3/9/19, 2:37 PM
Ah!! Very cleaver. Very cleaver indeed. Passive comics? Mike Grail? You twicky wabbit Please tell me there is a future appearance of the Substitute Horde of Future Heros
3/9/19, 1:20 PM
@LongtimeFan you bring up a point worth talking about. Although this is clearly a comic-book world -- set 1000 years in the future, I might add -- I really wanted to make sure I didn't cause any confusion using the "Boy/ Girl" "Lad/ Lass" monikers that I love so much. Readers of the LEGION OF SUPER-HEROES know that the characters are well-above the age of consent/ age of majority, but I still wanted to make sure I addressed it within the context of the story, as well as editorially. Originally, I was going to do an Author's Afterward to address it, then I thought it would be more fun to do it Fanzine form and keep the satire going. I think it works -- glad you think so, too.
davesub024@gmail.com
3/9/19, 12:18 PM
love being a hero jock
LongtimeFan
3/9/19, 12:06 PM
Phenomenal! A take on the Legion of Superheroes! :D I love that you threw in references to the ridiculous audition process (Color Change Kid, anyone?). Can't wait to see more! And I'm also glad you de-aged Rex into a teenager to take on teenagers...underage stuff is an immediate no-go, and I always appreciate when writers make it clear that everyone is able to consent. Great work!
Anonymous
3/9/19, 11:26 AM
Excellent work Wonderfully written Thanks