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3/8/19, 4:22 AM
Very good. Just one issue. Tim is thinking of getting men into the ORG's "clutches." And Charlie and Tim are thinking of how many they "snagged." Those are negative connotation words. As loyal members of the ORG, they would both thinking more glowing thoughts of the ORG's objective to get men, and be happy for the men rather them considering them snagged.
nycboot
3/8/19, 2:56 AM
Illness and travel kept me away from reading the last two installments. It's so interesting. I assume one climactic scene will be how Igor rid himself of Dracula and became a slave of Klaus. That Otto portends something dangerous up ahead. In the train scene where you mention the lady and her son Harold, I keep thinking that's an allusion to some 19th century British person - but I can't think of who it is. Who is it? Or might we find out later? Great going so far!
Anonymous
3/8/19, 1:53 AM
more!
Anonymous
3/8/19, 12:34 AM
Interesting travel interlude. I am a bit unclear on the connection between Vlad Tepes (historical Dracula) and the Count in the 1848 time period. Are they reincarnations? Parallel stories?
ForgottenCradle
3/7/19, 9:24 PM
Relaxer has amazing powers. I want to join this frat
3/7/19, 7:25 PM
Oh of course who does not bother you wake up and find that the country has become a "democratic" popular republic... AGAIN? xD Damn annoying revolutionaries hahahaha
Uniformmr
3/7/19, 5:42 PM
please contInue!!!
Anonymous
3/7/19, 5:27 PM
amazing story! maybe the next part (if you decide to write it, of course) could be the teacher getting more revenge on his student with the mind control email? and maybe recruiting other students or maybe a teacher with it?
JS01883
3/7/19, 4:37 PM
This is one of my favourite stories on here. I even bought a Jenkins name badge.
Anonymous
3/7/19, 4:34 PM
Awesome! I can't wait for the next chapter