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Alavar
3/6/19, 11:20 AM
Orcs from Warcraft. Thrall maybe?
3/6/19, 11:14 AM
Well, good writing can make anything real. Hell, we buy into Stephen King's crazy imagination. I mean, look what I write about, muscle-inducing magic potions, mind-control, alien plants that live in your balls... COME ON! I try very hard to make it as real as it can be. I'm glad you think I succeeded -- and I'm even gladder that I contributed to your sexual growth!!!! I started by buying muscle magazines and comic books for visual stimulation (We didn't have the internet.)
absman420
3/6/19, 11:04 AM
@JamieTi684 Can't help it. i like puns. Succinct humor is wit -- that's what my college writing teachers always said. I like to play with words -- especially w lyrics.
Absman420
3/6/19, 10:57 AM
@pupscout Sadly, the whole enchilada...
3/6/19, 10:25 AM
“What a MARVELOUS universe I’ve found…” - lol we see your puns Absman420 :D Amazing story, thank you for writing it!
Lb_
3/6/19, 8:41 AM
What a great concept, superb writing, would love to see more. ;)
Anonymous
3/6/19, 7:42 AM
Yay! magic transformation games, one of my favourites! looking forward to more.
LongtimeFan
3/6/19, 5:09 AM
Thank you so much! That was exactly the problem. Bring on the overmuscled transformation images! ;p
Anonymous
3/6/19, 4:59 AM
I can't wait for the next one, this was so hot!
3/6/19, 4:51 AM
While I'm not a fan of transformations, I like how you have hot, cocky jocks enslaved. Well written and a great idea. :)