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3/6/19, 11:14 AM
Well, good writing can make anything real. Hell, we buy into Stephen King's crazy imagination. I mean, look what I write about, muscle-inducing magic potions, mind-control, alien plants that live in your balls... COME ON! I try very hard to make it as real as it can be. I'm glad you think I succeeded -- and I'm even gladder that I contributed to your sexual growth!!!! I started by buying muscle magazines and comic books for visual stimulation (We didn't have the internet.)
absman420
3/6/19, 11:04 AM
@JamieTi684 Can't help it. i like puns. Succinct humor is wit -- that's what my college writing teachers always said. I like to play with words -- especially w lyrics.
Absman420
3/6/19, 10:57 AM
@pupscout Sadly, the whole enchilada...
3/6/19, 10:25 AM
“What a MARVELOUS universe I’ve found…” - lol we see your puns Absman420 :D Amazing story, thank you for writing it!
Lb_
3/6/19, 8:41 AM
What a great concept, superb writing, would love to see more. ;)
Anonymous
3/6/19, 7:42 AM
Yay! magic transformation games, one of my favourites! looking forward to more.
LongtimeFan
3/6/19, 5:09 AM
Thank you so much! That was exactly the problem. Bring on the overmuscled transformation images! ;p
Anonymous
3/6/19, 4:59 AM
I can't wait for the next one, this was so hot!
3/6/19, 4:51 AM
While I'm not a fan of transformations, I like how you have hot, cocky jocks enslaved. Well written and a great idea. :)
Anonymous
3/6/19, 4:33 AM
I love your stories. This one was great, and I'd love to read more but I'd really love to read more of the gypsy one too.i can't wait for the next one of that.