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Anonymous
10/30/24, 11:09 PM
I feel like the other Jock/Bully should’ve gotten a wedgie. You know, twist things and make Lance, the one who is supposed to give nerds wedgies, give the other Jocks humiliating wedgies. Using his potential on the people who expect it the least. Otherwise, I love the livestock. Very well done :)
Nov 30, 2021
Hypnominion
10/30/24, 11:03 PM
One more thing: I'd just like to mention that I; too, am a Black man who has engaged in Raceplay in the past. Normally, I'd include an essay on the two types of people that I've observed engage in Black/White raceplay, but I'd rather not have to (as I've done it many times, before, elsewhere), unless I'm asked... Suffice it to say, like Musky Master, my motivations for engaging in the practice was for catharsis, and I've found his story entertaining for much the same reason.
10/30/24, 10:59 PM
Loved this! So excited for more!
Nov 30, 2021
Hypnominion
10/30/24, 10:52 PM
Your story has some highly engrossing elements, and I agree with Hypnothrill's assertion that it requires a more in-depth exploration of the process of becoming. Further. I think that a deeper narrative might also address some of the issues that the others have been writing about. For example, I suggest clarifying how the images on the screen trigger both the character's orgasm and his compliance (flickering hypnotic flashes? subliminal sounds/images?),delving more into the transitioning of mind-set, and adding in some narrative moments that reveal the motivations of the zookeepers a bit more directly. These are just my opinions, however; take or discard them as you will.
10/30/24, 10:07 PM
Alright, I lied, I still had a very short story that fit the theme, but this time it's the last one for real. Consider it an extra ;P As usual, thank you for reading, I hope you enjoyed it, and feel free to leave any feedback! Probably won't be posting much until next Halloween unless inspiration strikes, but if you want a peek at the rest of my work (artwork, and some other stories that I felt didn't fit too well), or just talk about these stories if you enjoyed them, feel free to shoot me a DM!
10/30/24, 8:42 PM
That makes sense. Lucky windfall for Francis!
10/19/24, 3:13 PM
I'm not into the scat aspect, but I really loved the mental transformation: being useful, no self-doubt, loving the new existence. Bravo!

10/30/24, 7:44 PM
@[Rock Creek Werewolf](/user/show/10002145) Thank you! And yes, the mental transformation played an important role in this story.
10/30/24, 7:16 PM
Another fantastic story! Thank you so much! More tickling please :) :grinning:
Oct 1, 2023
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10/30/24, 3:22 PM
Is next chapter coming soon?