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Marktree6
3/5/19, 11:24 PM
Amazing! What a well crafted story man. Your so hot
3/5/19, 11:11 PM
Thank you @LoveHugeMuscles I'm glad my stuff has gotten you off! Isn't that really the greatest praise an author of erotica could get? These stories will hold an interesting place in my memoirs, that's for sure. In fact, I am a published author -- IRL -- though it was a humorous book and sadly, didn't make it to second printing. (I think I bought most of the copies myself to give away as gifts.) I'm prouder of the work I've done as a playwright and lyricist. I've had 15 works produced internationally, two national tours and one show that ran at the Edinburgh Fringe Festival. So I do take pride in my writing and work to craft everything, even the mind-control muscle-freak stories...
Marktree6
3/5/19, 11:00 PM
Brilliant!
Marktree6
3/5/19, 10:48 PM
Loved it. The muscle-bound stud & his boi turned into his pals slave.
Anonymous
3/5/19, 10:06 PM
The originalityyyy! So much potential, and what appears to be a writer who knows how to harvest
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3/5/19, 10:05 PM
I have to say it. I really really liked this story!! It's so unbelievably hot and depraved! I'll be expecting next chapter!
Anonymous
3/5/19, 9:58 PM
Great story! I'd down Cycle One in a heartbeat.
LoveHugeMuscles
3/5/19, 9:30 PM
Fuckin' classic! I still go back to this story quite often to get off. Absman420 continues to be one of my favorite authors of the genre.
3/5/19, 8:11 PM
Here's a behind the scenes story about this story: I wrote CYCLE ONE on New Year's Eve 2001 into 2002. My writing challenge was to pretend the ending of the story was real and that -- as narrator -- I knew I would HAVE to go back to the gym when it opened in the morning (and that would probably be the end of "me"), so I had to get the entire story out before this "deadline." So with nothing more than an 8-ball of cocaine, I wrote CYCLE ONE overnight, hurrying to finish it "before the gym opened". Now, to be fair, I did edit that draft before I posted it, but it's pretty much all-in-all what I wrote that night. I think the paranoia and coke-buzz are very evident in the prose.
3/5/19, 7:58 PM
Heeheehee -- thank you for your kind words. Oh... you're bound to be disappointed when you start the sequel. It's not as MARVEL-ous as promised.