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10/30/24, 6:03 AM
Eagerly awaiting the next chapter
Anonymous
10/30/24, 5:59 AM
Has been quite the trip, been loving the size exchange , the sex scenes and how things are turning around! Sad part is I have been forced to slip through the story to avoid the piss stuff Outside that has been fantastic
10/27/24, 6:00 PM
Awesome story, I loved the 1950's gay family with each being the opposite of who they were. You really do get the sadistic side to Adrian's costumes and how he has a very specific vision of the world and how it's seems to amp up the scale of the story. Would have loved to see the Mayor TF or the clown, but I do see that it's meant to show that he is very active. While it's interesting to see William being pretty much in line to Adrian, his pervious fear of what he can do to people added to the tension of the TF stuff with seeing in horror at see rewriting peoples whole identify right in front of his eyes. But then again having William around asking question to Adrian probably helps a lot to give an excuse to explain his thought process. I hope there is still a lot more to come, your stuff really helps to inspire me in my art stuff.

Anonymous
10/30/24, 2:53 AM
@[Someone Else](/user/show/10047963) Agreed - I really hope there’s more to come in this saga. The ending to this chapter leaves the reader needing more
10/30/24, 1:16 AM
Great passage! Loved how you conveyed Luke losing control of his mind along with his body. Really hoping you choose to go back and add a new entry to Dad Pussy Syndrome. We can't leave Hank hanging like that!
10/29/24, 9:51 PM
Terrific story -- moved along quickly even for its length. Well done!

10/30/24, 12:45 AM
@[absman420](/user/show/162063) Means a lot coming from someone of your caliber
10/29/24, 11:22 AM
Very hot, I always appreciate a slow burn more than something that's like "BAM! You're hypnotized!"

10/30/24, 12:45 AM
@[Mindwinder](/user/show/296830) Thanks. Been trying a more slow burn style.
Anonymous
10/29/24, 5:17 PM
Good story! Well written!

10/30/24, 12:45 AM
@Anonymous Thank you!
10/29/24, 9:20 PM
Not bad. One critique, though: Earlier in the story, you describe Bobby's eyes as hazel. Later, however, you describe them as green. Otherwise, and as always, I enjoyed the read. :slightly_smiling_face:
10/25/24, 9:47 PM
literally hopped on today to reread fascinum and find you’ve dropped an amazing new story instead! cannot wait to see where this one goes!!

10/28/24, 9:04 PM
@[tumnus](/user/show/917823) :sweat_smile: The next chapter of Fascinum is 2/3 done -- the hardest part for me is always wrapping up my editing. Maybe I should make my New Year's resolution finishing some stories...

10/29/24, 7:45 PM
@[bluesuedewho](/user/show/1225367) Ha! I’ll admit I would love to see some conclusions here and there but overall I have no issues with starting a new story if you’re the one telling it.
10/29/24, 1:08 PM
You didn't fail to surprise and delight me with this adaptation of your college series. Have to research more about the American fraternity house stuff. Thought I knew a bit from TV over the years but reading your piece makes me want to understand it more. Bravo on getting me 🔥

10/29/24, 6:53 PM
@[Titan](/user/show/17556) Thank you! I’m so happy you enjoy it. Some of this is loosely based on Greek Life but I draw heavily from my experience in a fraternity, especially when crafting the characters. Most of the guys are variations on real men I know.